Print screens for evaluation

Overall Result...

We have finally finished our thriller opening and overall we are pleased with the outcome. We feel that our footage and camerawork is more professional than our children's film and we feel that we have learnt a lot more about the programs we have to use such as Final Cut and Garage Band. The only thing that we are not initially happy with is our music. we feel that the music is good but we feel that children's film music fitted better with the footage. We are very pleased with the editing though as we feel we have learnt a lot more of the programs and the fades we added were very effective. We also used lots of special effects that we didn't use in the children's film such as 'bad TV'. Also we feel that our credits are a lot better this time around and they look more professional. Overall we are very pleased with it and we hope we get a good mark.

Thriller Final

We've Finished....

Today we have finally finished out thriller opening!!!!!!!!! We feel that it is successful and we achieved everything that we wanted to.

Print-screens For Evaluation...

These are some pictures for our evaluation of GarageBand and PhotoShop....

Feed back for Rough cut.

After showing our rough cut.

People said we had :

- a good variety of shots

- a good title and the effects we put with it.

- People liked the footage as well.

- good use of location.

improvements:

- People said that our moving credits should be slower but we decided that we don't want them to move.

- People didn't understand the sounds of tape ripping and creaking floor boards therefore we are thinking of moving the sounds to the actual scene they are from.

- One person thought Yasmin looked nervous in the lift but we disagreed and thought she looked like she was in a rough like she was suppose to.

- The music change in the second scene was too drastic but we already knew that.

- our teacher said we should put a record sign on the flashes of tania which she knew that was already our plan.

Rough cut.

This is our first draft. At the moment we are not completely pleased with the music for several reasons.
It is out of time which we feel it doesn't show it at its best and we aren't happy with the music for the second scene.

Editing update

During the past few lessons we have been working on the editing of the project such as cutting, fades, credits, title, etc.

We spent quite a while on photoshop to do our credits to be able to get rid the white background. We spent a lesson adding in fades and transitions to different clips.

Also, this lesson we just finished putting the title at the end but we plan to make it move next lesson.

Screen shots for Evaluation